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Abe
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since 2003-05-28
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2005-03-17 06:32 PM


FOREVERGREEN
(The Senator)

For thirty-five hundred years
You've towered o'er this land
Almost one hundred forty feet
The great height that you stand.

Fifty thousand board feet
Of lumber, your trunk bears
Some say, "That is awesome!"
And there's some who say, "Who cares!"

The top of you is hollow
To catch the falling rain
Like a well up in the Sky
To quench your thirst again.

Forty-seven feet around
And eighteen feet across
And if you died and fell
It would be the people's loss.

Big Tree, it seems such a shame
That you must be fenced in
To protect you from those who
Would strip your branches and skin.

I hope future generations
Can stare at you in awe
And that you won't fall victim to
Man's poisons, or chain saw.

pics and history > http://www.floridata.com/tracks/TheSenator/page1.htm

Del "Abe" Jones

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-17 07:04 PM


Well done Sir.
And congrats again on being published.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2005-03-18 06:20 AM


well done! enjoyed this piece of history
J.Samm
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since 2004-01-12
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Iloilo City, Philippines
3 posted 2005-03-18 06:29 AM


splendid rhyming...a wonderful tribute!
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