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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-03-17 05:44 PM


I admit it, I LOVE YOU!


Tantalizing, warm and tender.
Anticipation,
as I await you arrival…

To hold you close,
enjoying imminent bliss
to my survival…

A wispy knock at my front door
It’s you, I know, I know
The wait is over…

Pizza...

With extra cheese, and pepperoni
Green olives, onions and more
I can’t wait to open the door…

“Here keep the change”
It’s worth the four extra dollars,
As my stomach grumbles, growls,
And hollers….

Now,
a tall glass of Chianti,
and a large slice of PIE!

I admit it!
I LOVE YOU!



© Copyright 2005 JL - All Rights Reserved
TexUS
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since 2003-03-20
Posts 228

1 posted 2005-03-17 07:29 PM


Make mine a plain cheese, or with JALAPENO'S, and I'm right there with you!





Enjoyed this yummy read!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-03-17 07:32 PM


Quite a surprise after reading the title..
Yet very very much enjoyed!!!
Hugs~Nancy

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-03-17 07:34 PM


I'm literally drooling! ~ First from your title ~ and then from that yummy-sounding pizza!

You're a charmer, JL!


EA
Pizza Pie

Michelle_loves_Mike
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4 posted 2005-03-17 10:57 PM


Gotta love it,,,I'm a lucky girl,,my b/f works at a pizzaria,,,so when I jones for pizza,,I'm set!

No one really cares,,why should I?

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-03-18 06:16 AM


hehehe...I love this
J.Samm
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Iloilo City, Philippines
6 posted 2005-03-18 06:51 AM


ohhh...so endearing! a very charming write
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-03-18 07:20 AM


LOL..very cute, witty!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
8 posted 2005-03-18 08:24 AM


Umm! Good one. I had my special friend over yesterday.

Thanks, Melton

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2005-03-18 09:46 AM


LOL! This is cute.
DavePage
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10 posted 2005-03-18 02:21 PM


Nice one JL.

Dave

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2005-03-18 04:35 PM


Double cheese, please...
suthern
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12 posted 2005-03-18 05:01 PM


ROFL... I hope you plan on sharing! LOL

Enjoyed this!!!

Klassy Lassy
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Oregon
13 posted 2006-04-03 03:39 PM


Ahhhh!  pizza...such decadence!  That's Amore!   Women don't stand a chance when this kind of seduction is around... not unless they are making the pizza in their own hot little hands.  

~ Karen  

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