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Let This Be Goodbye (triple senryu)
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Let This Be Goodbye (triple senryu) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Love isn't enough to silence all of the lies I cant stand the sounds... Two wings are broken again, someday they might fly if I can believe... Green eyes are crying my love wasn't good enough Let this be goodybe... I really want to care I want to feel something let me dig a little deeper.. Nah, still nothing... My give a DAMN is busted.....Jodee |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As some wise young woman just told me... this is something that we can get past... but we have to know it is the right thing...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, I doubt that any love extending from you could ever be "not enough". Perhaps the problem lie within the recipient who was not open enough to accept what you had to offer. Beautifully written ~ and very touching, my poetess friend. Hugs with love, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yeah Kari, and that knowing thing sure does just stink sometimes....and not knowing is even worse... decisions, decisions... Thank you Linda, hugs back at ya... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Nope, not now, not ever... your artistic flow, even in good-bye is eloquent and memorable beyond parting. Love, somy |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Nope, not now, not ever... your artistic flow, even in good-bye is eloquent and memorable beyond parting. Love, somy |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reggie....God I miss you.... thank you for being here today.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ya know, when the right person comes along, you will forget all of this, and he will compliment your being...not tear it down...but admire you and want nothing but the best for you...confident enough to know, that he is the best...for you... wonderful writing |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
I love it. I am actually listening to that song by Jodee. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Three lovelies. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You write something as awful as heartbreak... and give it beauty. Excellent write! *S* |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Beautiful! Made my day. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and right now the words from Garths song haunt me.... "my life is better left to chance I could have missed the pain but I'd have had to miss the dance.." *shakin my head* Yup.... hugging you all, thanks..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like to think that sometimes it works out and sometimes it doesn't...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Donna , once you are over the pain ... you will fly again , your heart was being tested , so you wings are being rested Hugs Hope |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sadly beautiful dear Donna. hugs to you, Chris You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow. |
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