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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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Life has more meaning than this, does it not? We are all born to die inside seasons winter, for deeper is the silent grave and its plot, When words cut the heart like a splinter, What mark unto this life you leave? All things will rot in slow, mournful decay, Upon thy last breath, your hands will cleave, When the words of deaths wind blows your way, What chosen part must each of us play? Inside this world of conflict and confusion, When reality looses its way, creating grand Illusion, Why don't you analyze your own reflection? See the colorful masterpiece standing before you? To find the answers look inside yourself, Lifes' introspection~ "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-17-2005 08:32 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Magnificent! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Lee, My brow is sweating, I worked hard on this one...LOL.. "Something Different" was my goal and methinks I have achieved the challenge! ~Love and Hugs ~ARh  "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write..much enjoyed the read and the change. You wrote this very well. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! You most assuredly did rise to that challenge. ~ Sometimes challenges are good things. They can pull some treasures out of us ~ as was the case with this excellent poem! Very well done. Your "sweat" produced some fine results!   EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
An excellent effort, on 'something different', My Lady. I think the 'sweat' was well worth the result. Methinks I shall heed its message, too. CG |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
See you can write something different....thank you..enjoyed the change... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...there has to be more to life than this thanks for the view |
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