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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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During It’s during intermissions night I turn my inner lamp to bright To mime my daylight passage time Within the echoes of my prime But that is not the all of it I mime the echoes with my wit And change the vectors final fall Into the phantoms of my call I hold her hand and stay the glen I change the odes of where and when I light our way a rainbows lie And act upon each heave and sigh I speak of things I could not do And with a thought make all come true And happiness begins to bloom Where once there was but sad and doom I send to her a snow white dove And tell her of my inner love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this, you, this morning, after reading this, is absolute beauty...no matter the weather, the warm of sun shone from above, through you....tender and sweet words to sooth the mind and soul...thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very beautiful Sy! I'll just bet you make all her dreams come true. Have a Happy St. Patrick's Day m'friend. A cup of steaming green tea for you this fine morn. ~Irish hugs & tea, Nancy~ For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
So beautiful....so beautiful. Library bound it is ! hugs to you Seymour. Chris You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I turn my inner lamp to light" ~ Yet another of your poetic lines that shall forever be with me. We do have the power within us to do just that, but ofttimes mankind forgets that the divine switch is there. I felt the love radiating from you for this person ~ and I do believe that you may have turned on their Light switch with your loving and caring, Sir Sonneteer. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I had to pick up your comment with a towel it was so warm. Good morning sweet. Nancy, What would I do without your hugs and tea.  Chris, You are so dear to me. Earth Angel Baptismal of an aim, thank you dear. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo, very nice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, OOOOOW Thank you. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good March morning, Sy... when you're the apple of her eye. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Apples and pears and something to spare. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, you are a lovely man... and this is wonderful! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It’s during intermissions night I turn my inner lamp to bright To mime my daylight passage time Within the echoes of my prime But that is not the all of it I mime the echoes with my wit And change the vectors final fall Into the phantoms of my call I hold her hand and stay the glen I change the odes of where and when I light our way a rainbows lie And act upon each heave and sigh ================================== YOU ARE SOOOOOOOO COOOOL..... do you know HOW COOL this poem is????? that first verse alone is OVER THE TOP of cool!!! this is COOL WHIP on raspberry Jello  I am giddy with poetic admire..... It’s during intermissions night I turn my inner lamp to bright To mime my daylight passage time I mime the echoes with my wit And change the vectors final fall I change the odes of where and when And act upon each heave and sigh just look at each of those lines of rhymes divine. you rock and it rolls me. *L* Now kiss me quick...Im irish... LOL *WINKIEWINKIE*   one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... ~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You're not only Irish, but an Irish delight. The Irish tinkerbell of my twilight. You read my mind of all its weave And pin point the words that I believe. |
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