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startin_fresh
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0 posted 2005-03-17 12:43 PM


Emerging From Darkness


From the deep cavern
He emerges
Musty,tattered clothes
He dons
A long solemn sleep
He had


A gut wrenching yell
He bellows
Moving towards light
He quakes
Unsettling to him
He weeps


Morphing into human
He moves
Into public view
He arrives
Letting all know
He's back

Nothing hurts more than sitting next to the one you love - knowing it will never be.

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-03-17 07:09 AM


wonderfully written
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2005-03-17 09:47 AM


Welcome back. Wonderful write.
TD

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-03-17 10:08 AM


startin-fresh ~

So that is where you have been? Seriously speaking, this is one show-stopping return!

Glad to see that you are back to the land of the living ~ and posting again!

This really packed a fine poetic punch!

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,
EA

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-03-17 01:42 PM


cool!
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