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CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-03-15 07:25 PM



What will the cover of the darkness bring?
But satin words in crimson ink
beckoning Knight’s heart to meet —
But Time’s cruel hand
will play its own card —

For upon the meadow ground
Thy countenance imprinted
where blades of grass
willing sacrificed their pride,
folding into messengers
for my eyes only —
I envied them, for they had
felt your form —
Had I but been in their place!
I lay my own upon that mirage
afloat on the meadow grass;
dreaming you there; closeness
of breath and warmth of heart;
stillness of the moment to last...

Then the merciless Sun shot its
waking beam upon my face; breaking
the dream...
And I relinquished Thy hold,
as one releases a mist
of morning dew from his palm —
Oh, that longing ache in heart!
For elusive Thou art, My Queen
— As a dream within a dream.

CG

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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-03-15 10:40 PM


My Dearest Love,

What passion so red, so velvet I feel, from your words. The magic you have spun, my  heart is forever at thy will, for your words take hold of this heart, grasping, binding, filling it with levels of love and passion that I have never felt before~

You, my knight are so talented, the best in the land! Proud, so proud you have made my heart smile with no end!

~I love how you took our email and made a poem of it~ Brilliant!  just Brilliant!

Outstanding....in awe of you!

~Love
thy Fiery Lady


"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-03-16 12:34 PM


"Then the merciless Sun shot its
waking beam upon my face; breaking
the dream...
And I relinquished Thy hold,
as one releases a mist
of morning dew from his palm —"

way too cool

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-03-16 06:37 AM


I agree Midnitesun....of, course I love the whole poem!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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