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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-15 07:11 AM

they are the trees of skin
leaning on a wind
that ended before they were born
when god's breath quit
trying to put life in
a hollywood adam or madame
with a bosom habit
heartless

wishing for the love cans
that are drug behind
the junk yard caddy
up on blocks
while the stolen rims spin
on a homie's short ride
three shots past a nine
and then third time, time

as an eve this time
til he likes the comfort
of punishment
better than the freedom
of discovering alone
on the outside
where life is a flicker
from a gum wrapper tin's

insignificant discolorations

_____________

dark..(scribnote..hollywood and vine 4 am alley view.... f stop 11 over exposed black and white)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-15 08:30 AM

My feet felt that corner
once upon a long ago
even then
best seen in b&w...

Good morning, Dark...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2005-03-15 08:55 AM

hi lady sun...it was better a few years ago
seems a bit shoddy now...but then at 4 am
most of the streets do..thanks lady friend

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-15 09:03 AM

they certainly are stivers of vine...ours...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2005-03-15 09:19 AM

"til he likes the comfort
of punishment
better than the freedom
of discovering alone"

*smile*

missed you.

My time here seems like a hit and run these days...

Hope all is well Mr. D!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-03-15 10:16 AM

You paint such glamour - not. You speak truth and give a picture of life that the movies forget when they speak of Hollywood - you know I love looking through your eyes -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-03-15 01:06 PM

DS

"life is a flicker
from a gum wrapper tin's"

Very descriptive!

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