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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-15 07:07 AM


I Wash Each Day

I wash away each day of grime
With soap that’s made of passing time
And dry myself each daily breeze
The same that moves the stately trees

I watch the clouds that fly above
The changing colors that I love
Where birds add mix with butterflies
And shows a moon that turns the tides

I walk the paths were walked before
And store the memories of its awe
The core of life that shows each day
Each life that passes on its way

And though I know each path of wend
I cannot speak beyond its end
I pay the price of time and toll
And have my doubts about a soul

And what I know for sure is strange
That all I know for sure will change



© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
J.Samm
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1 posted 2005-03-15 08:16 AM


wow, i've never thought of washing in this sense before...charming write sey...
Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-03-15 08:44 AM


Oh to see the world through your eyes Sy!
Wonderful morning write!  Much enjoyed.
Tea is brewing..I'll pour.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-03-15 08:52 AM


Good Morning Sy
You've taken me on an out of body experience...shame on you!!!

He, he...wishing you a fine day

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-03-15 08:54 AM


a delight of a write Sey,
good morning sweets.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-03-15 09:16 AM


"I Wash Each Day" ~ and so do I!

Mind you, you have taken it beyond a daily bath or shower! You've taken it into the realm of the inner cleanse of mind and spirit.

Mr. T., if you had walked in my shoes you would know beyond a shadow of a doubt that we have a soul that lives on forever. I could literally fill books of what I have personally witnessed and experienced.

May you glow with life's flow,

~ Angel song of love,
EA

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2005-03-15 09:32 AM


"And what I know for sure is strange
That all I know for sure will change"

That is beautifully stated, Sy. How true it is indeed. Just one request? Please don't ever change your sweet nature and poetic charms. We loves ya just the way you are.

Loved this morning read.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

RMW
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7 posted 2005-03-15 09:59 AM


Seymour .......... Very wise, and nicely versed. Bob
saved_by_grace
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8 posted 2005-03-15 10:11 AM


"And what I know for sure is strange
That all I know for sure will change"

WOW...VERY NICELY stated, Sy!!   So beautiful...this mornings read...thank you!

  Becka

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-03-15 11:06 AM


J.Samm
Thank you for the charming answer.

Nancy,
You pour I'll drink. Hugs

LeeJ
Thank you sweety.

Gentle,
Some tea with the sweets?

Earth Angel,
Well you're closer then I am and besides I'm not too bright.

Kit,
Who could ask for anything more.

Bob,
Thank you much.

Becka,
The big WOW is good enough for me. Thank you

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2005-03-15 01:20 PM


With soap that’s made of passing time
==================================

you get extra winkies for that line...
its so cool Randy is wearing a sweater...lol

Randy washes behind his ears with your rhymes

*ww*

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

wandering glider
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11 posted 2005-03-15 02:16 PM


Charmed,
your pen.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
12 posted 2005-03-15 05:10 PM


JM,
Thank you and miss you.


wandering glider
Charmed with your reply.

suthern
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13 posted 2005-03-16 02:48 PM


Boy... does it ever... and usually for the worse! LOL (Sorry... the pessimist portion of me is fully in charge these days *G*)

This is fantastic, my friend... both beautiful and true! *S*

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