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ice
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0 posted 2005-03-15 06:22 AM


Urban Sprawl

"Haphazard growth or extension outward,
especially that resulting from real estate development
on the outskirts of a city."

(The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language)
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One day in spring:

Before the ice had gone
From liquids in the ground,
The place, that they called home
Was rung,
With an unusual sound...

Over the  trill of redwings,
That called from the rivers-edge:

Came hazard sounds of monsters,
Drinking diesel with their mouths.
Tanks with blades had come
To level out their stolen claims,  
And armies hired by the gentry made
Smooth the forest hills, and paths
So that followers in comfort
Here could flee
From  crime and grime
That plagued their ruined city...

(A few years later...)

The does that sleep beneath
The planted dogwood trees
Are tame replacements
For the ones who lived here once,
When this place was wild and free...  

But today, they are but
Animations, living ornaments
Like cheaply hired extras;
Painted props that drowse all day
Beside a cardboard castle,
On a privledged someones
Glass and plastic stage.

If reality is seen, the scene
Is set upon a ruined space.
In theatre of ill, and odd placed
Charactors,  
Where human lives entangle
With the native plants, and animals;

The webs that salesmen-spiders weave,
Has lured them into ancient nets
Of avarice and greed.

But promices on gold-leaf signs
Remain unkept, what they describe
In pasture themes, is gone
That here had always been;
And in their place are roads
And those, that brought
Their fiefdom dreams with them.

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-03-15 06:30 AM


All in the key of "haphazard".

Man forgets to let nature
hold stage
forgets to "blend in"
in order to be with one.

Man forgets...
too much.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-03-15 06:41 AM


Sadly knowing what you describe, and so perfectly...thank you Ford
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3 posted 2005-03-15 09:51 AM


"they paved paradise, put in a parking lot"
one of my favorites from Joni Mitchell
I remember all too well what the bulldozers did to Southern California in the 50's and 60's.

Stone deer and carved wooden bears, pink plastic flamingos, artificial lawns, plastic flowers and fake logs...all over Arizona, Washington, California, Florida, even here in some parts of Oregon. (I do admit though enjoying some metal scupted cranes)  
*sigh*
I spent Sunday at Portland's formal Japanese gardens, sitting by the hira-niwasculpted sand patterns, strolling alongside the ponds and streams, enjoying the graceful shaping of branches laden with the buds of spring.
It offered a moment as close to hiking a Japan mountain as I can get in the city. Not exactly Zen, as there were far too many people meandering and chatting (me for one) the pathways to achieve any sense of quiet being or purposeful thought. But it sure beats all that plastic.  

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
4 posted 2005-03-17 12:02 PM


Ford,
I agree with the others here.

Within this heart you'll find love

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