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Huan Yi
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I watch you. . .
in your quietudes:

a deer

as moves
the silent woods,

a bird

as sings
with outstretched wings

the sky
at dusk. . .

to sleep
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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Serenely beautiful, yet intense in its still awareness.


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This is truly beautiful.....not just because of the title....lol...it's quiet and gorgeous. hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

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A few scattered words, yet they encompass so much. You're a master of this!

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enjoyed the feeling of this...soft, gentle
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very soft
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Beautiful!
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how can you just write one after another such beautiful poems???? envy.
 
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