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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2005-03-14 07:50 PM



I misunderstood
Younger
Misunderstood
Older
Now I understand about the gap
What you have achieved and want to achieve

But the gap of what you’ll feel
Is the gap you choose to kneel
And credentials you have spoken

Always fitting in
Never chance for skill
is being prevented from achieving
Is outside of your guild

Unless you can face that
You made a choice
You didn’t think ahead
You just fell in love
Instead

But family, marriage, business
Paid by your bills
Stuff at some point
As an interesting old thrill

But the bill is still in you
The unpaid bill, the stick up bill, the loan in you
And you moan
And want to run
Family
Checking your house price
For their own

Run away, run away
Before you are too old
They will catch
But some years before too bold

And run away from everyone
But you cant run away from yourself

And that is for yourself
And the life

Is on the little beach shelf

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-03-14 08:16 PM



Yes, I understand the giving away of too much of one's self. To have the balance in our lives, I believe we still need others in our lives for no man is an island. However, I do feel that it is also important, as you wrote, to have a little shelf of beach to ourself.


EA


miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2005-03-14 09:52 PM


DAve,
  A very interesting and POWERFUL write.  I can tell this is about someone very dear to your heart.  
                  miscellanea

froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2005-03-29 06:59 PM


Dave,
Your words speak the truth.
Enjoyed this write very much so.

:-)


Within this heart you'll find love

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