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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-14 08:11 AM


Rendered Silence

I squeezed the silence of my mind
To see the residue I’d find
And in the process of the press
I found the clothing of the less

I found desire is a view
And illusion is a coup
And in the silence of the shroud
Lies the taste of being proud

I found the taste of it a snort
And the opulence a wart
And in the silence of extreme
Lies the essence of a scream

For all is under times control
In the building of a soul
Homogenous is the mean
And only tenuous the scene

So if you would content your fate
Live your life a natural state



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-03-14 08:13 AM


I found the taste of it a snort
And the opulence a wart
And in the silence of extreme
Lies the essence of a scream


Good Morning Sy
I don't know why, but while reading, invisioned the Gladiator...loved that movie...

Anyway, you project a mind full of wisdom this morning...warm hugs and thank you for the smiling sun

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2005-03-14 08:22 AM


For all is under times control
In the building of a soul
Homogenous is the mean
And only tenuous the scene

============================

what would we do without our morning dose of Sy wisdom.

Homogenous is the mean
And only tenuous the scene


how can I not love lines like those?

you are the *winkiest of the winkies* *L*

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-03-14 08:30 AM


LeeJ
Good morning and thank you sweety.

JM,
Shall we saddle Randy and visit a rainbow today?

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4 posted 2005-03-14 09:10 AM


Seymour your words have the ability to transport the mind to a wonderful, dream-filled place. Thankyou for this & hugs,
Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-03-14 09:21 AM


Chris,
Thank you and kisses and hugs back.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-03-14 11:53 AM


Good morning, Mr. T. ~

I know that there is so much more to your poem than snorts and warts, but those are the words that are sticking to my halo!

Another creative and imaginative write!


EA


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-03-14 12:07 PM


Earth Angel
Don't let the snorts and warts worry you.
LOL

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8 posted 2005-03-15 05:08 PM


Your words are always such a treat... beautiful rhymes full of wisdom. *S*
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-03-15 05:11 PM


suthern
Love you too.

Martie
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10 posted 2005-03-15 09:16 PM


Sy

Such wisdom in words and good advice...thank you!  

passing shadows
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11 posted 2005-03-15 09:18 PM


well said!
jwesley
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12 posted 2005-03-15 09:19 PM


Never got around to tasing a "snort" Seymour...but after reading this I may just give it a try. Might not too!

Enjoy  this piece my friend.

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-03-15 09:24 PM


Martie
Thank you dear.

passing  
Sweet dreams my lady.

jwesley
Well a snort would be better than a wart.
Thank you

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