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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-03-14 07:24 AM



for you today
I bring the other side image
that side where we are the trees
and the sky leaves us behind

where we are a roads
that we made alone
we are the groved paths
in parallel journey

and we are the friendly worn
of our own wheels
slow turning into the fit
of day dream recognition

we are the curbless curves
slow rounded down
where we can pull over
and be love metal reflecting

the sunless warm
with our windows down
and our seats reclined
til they touch together

velvet to leather gloving
_______

Dark

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-14 07:43 AM


yes, and wishing so, others out there saw the way you and many other poets see...
Your a love song in your own...one very signficant

Hiya and Good Morning
Tremendous cup of coffee you serve up this morning

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-03-14 10:24 AM


ok...I've had my dark fix for the day....
now I can wake up.   
Love the smooth in this babe, well done.  Especially enjoyed thisun....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-03-14 10:55 AM


Tall, Dark & Handsome, I do believe that this may be my personal favourite of all your poems that I have had the pleasure of reading! This was exquisite ~ and a


EA

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-03-14 11:05 AM


yes, when i read your words, they take me to other worlds and i swim blithely through their essence - mmmmmmmmm - love your mind D

  S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2005-03-15 08:35 PM


MUCH enjoyed!

jwesley

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
6 posted 2005-03-15 08:41 PM


DS

"we are the curbless curves
slow rounded down
where we can pull over
and be love metal reflecting"

otherworldy indeed!  


Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
7 posted 2005-03-16 12:36 PM


*sighing*
"we are the curbless curves
slow rounded down"
and then some, yes

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