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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2005-03-14 01:11 AM



When single is no longer an option
life alone means living like a dog
couple mode comes in handy
single style lustre fades


one can always live alone
watch dishes pile in the sink
sleep with empty pillow alongside
until couple mode comes in vogue

when single is no longer an option
a table set for one, brings tears
one thinks there must be ideal company
there has to be someone to share

for everyone there is a mate
to meet on determined date
couple mode falls into place
single styles lose their grace.


© Copyright 2005 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Opoetry4me
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1 posted 2005-03-14 08:06 PM


This is a very nice piece. Good job.

~~Dara Beth~~

If everyone would smile, we would have a world of happy people. Just a suggestion.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-03-14 08:47 PM


Couple mode is wonderful ~ if you have the right partner. If not, single mode definitely has its advantages. I thank my lucky stars that I have the perfect partner and am thorougly enjoying the couple mode ~ and so is he! May this be the same for you as well!


EA

miscellanea
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3 posted 2005-03-14 08:52 PM


Neat poem...  Yes, I think we each have our mates or connections in the universe.  As to address your poem, I think singles and couples have their unique advantages and disadvantages... and at the "determined date".  Enjoyed,

         miscellanea

ecrivan
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4 posted 2005-03-14 11:04 PM


yes,there is always someone to share our expereinces as there are always people who will differ from us..thanks for sharing


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5 posted 2005-03-15 09:32 AM


Thou speakest truth, my friend....yea verily doth it fade.....

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iliana
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6 posted 2005-03-17 12:02 PM


Cute poem....I think you're right.   ...jo
ecrivan
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7 posted 2005-03-18 01:18 AM


thanks all for reading, how can I do a poem on celebacy without one on couples


passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-03-18 07:03 AM


I watch those couples sometimes
wonder if they are really happy


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