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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-03-13 06:24 PM



Why are you always looking?
and looking for something more

Why are you always digging?
and digging in side my soul

Why do I seem so shallow?
and shallow yet even more

Why are you never happy?
and unhappy you make me

Why are there clouds around you
and around your atmosphere

But here I am now crying!
and crying I'll walk away!


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-13 07:53 PM


sometimes people dig to find happiness

good write, feeling well expressed

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2005-03-13 10:06 PM


Perhapps... But maybe that is the problem. or not. This poem, just came to me and I started singing. What else can I say.


Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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