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Huan Yi
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Waukegan


0 posted 03-13-2005 02:28 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Monsoonó
A constant rain
encloses the world

Ditches fill
beside the roads
The river becomes a muddy flood
that rushes out to sea

Lightning bolts
across the sky
Birds seek shelter
among the trees

A small
black squirrel
shakes the water
off its fur

and gets included
in a poem
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Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 03-13-2005 03:52 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Great imagery..much enjoyed the read.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

TexUS
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2 posted 03-13-2005 10:24 PM       View Profile for TexUS   Email TexUS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TexUS

You took me there.  
Truly enjoyed this!
Drauntz
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ugly peace in uglier war.
 
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