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Quarter Mile
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Quarter Mile |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
We looked an uneven lengths of metal young in their day still shining with the sun telling stories of a day shining manufacture bright and brand new and offering something that was good and anew An old rustic rail by an old rustic shell but a gleam arises as the Sun crawls from a shell and an old rustic entity stops and watches long and an old rustic vision is there And a young man walks away with pride in his step He burnished his own rail and walked along a crippled step that bends twists and turns until in yourself the feet words visions return and the sun glistens on steel But not you words you feel as he walks upon his history his very private mile that dims his vision on that quarter mile |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very enjoyable read Dave. Great imagery...well done sir. ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks but to be honest, writing is harder and harder for me. Dave |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very enjoyable and interesting read this am~ My spirit will rise |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
David, you see glorious things...well done...thank you |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dave ,so much can be seen and reminisced going along those tracks Hope |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks all Dave |
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