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exhale
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Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-03-13 02:03 AM


let's play make-believe
and the stars will fall out of the sky
this isn't a time for goodbyes
because it's autumn
our words could keep us warm

let's play make-believe
and make it rain
we'll take the long way home
because it's winter
our words could help us smile

let's play make-believe
and dance through the night
i'll hug you longer this time, i swear
because it's spring
our words could fly through the air

let's play make-believe.

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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-03-13 10:40 AM


Very pretty write.
Enjoyed. Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-03-13 10:44 AM


exhale
You're on, I'll play. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-03-13 01:52 PM


Chelsea this is so beautiful..
Very much enjoyed the lyrical feel while reading.
Hugs~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-03-14 01:25 AM


~it is good to be playful in relationships..makes you feel you young again!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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