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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-03-13 12:14 PM



I'm Still Here Nontheless

Missed hearing from you
Wherever you might be
Could this be the ending
That I have failed to see

You told me not to worry
Yet you are silent again
It seems my recent tears
Have been shed in vain

If only my tears could talk
In the dark place I dwell
I'm still here nonetheless
As these silent tears fell

We had shared so much
We've always got along
I hoped you would tell me
If something was wrong

HopeĀ©2005

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crimson tear
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 76
Massachusetts
1 posted 2005-03-13 12:16 PM


wow really good write. you feel the emotion in the words.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2005-03-13 11:06 AM


I'm on both sides of this...even on the same day

what a roller coaster

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-03-13 12:50 PM


I hope that isn't for real Hope.

It would be like putting the Crown Jewels in a supermarket.

regards

Dave

TexUS
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since 2003-03-20
Posts 228

4 posted 2005-03-14 12:16 PM


I've felt this pain before-you wrote it well.
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2005-03-14 01:23 AM


~ I can't stand the silence, the not knowing is what kills you?????....

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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