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Local Rebel
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0 posted 2005-03-12 10:23 PM


so do you sit like Buddha
ohming farewell
to dreams
desiring to be without
desire

from the looks of things
Siddhartha had a
midnite yen for
cous cous
himself

but Ohm's law is universal
the more one resists
the higher the voltage goes

[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (03-13-2005 12:29 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-03-12 10:37 PM


...and sparks fly?

So nice to see you writing again!

Martie
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2 posted 2005-03-12 10:40 PM


LR

Hi!  Perhaps moderation is best even with ohms....although I think the positive influance of meditation is pretty powerful stuff.  Your poem got my attention.  I always like to read you because you are such a thinking man, but I don't always agree. That's a good thing.  

Martie
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3 posted 2005-03-12 10:45 PM


However, after doing a little research, I see I am way off base in understanding this poem....so sorry.  Perhaps an explanation?
Local Rebel
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4 posted 2005-03-12 10:45 PM


@ Sunshine's response -- thank you ma'am..

ah, Martie -- I lopped off the other 47 strophes that go behind this -- tis better as a koan... but only part two ... part one was 'contentment without hope'...

my thoughts extend in arcs yanno?

Juju
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5 posted 2005-03-13 06:03 PM


I like this poem alot. Only... I must say with more resistance can also lead to less current. hehehe. Things could go really slow.
Love your stuff always,
Juju  

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passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-03-13 07:47 PM


you always got a way

of making me think

Juju
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7 posted 2005-03-13 10:07 PM


I Diddo P.S.
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2005-03-13 10:41 PM


Dear Rebel With A Cause, I enjoyed this wondrous poem on several levels!

Love & Light,
Linda

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9 posted 2005-03-13 10:42 PM


Ooops-a-daisy!...Now it's saved!
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