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0 posted 2005-03-12 02:05 PM



Hey, life ain’t for people-
Who worry all the time,
Changing faces on drop of a dime,
Nothing to show for a lifetime,
Just nther wait for a mealtime,
Well I choose to decline,
This ever boring design,
And gonna make ma life full of rhymes,
Living past ma bed time,
Committing all the crimes,
Speaking against the mimes,
Who locks with their rules,
Damn educated fools…

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-12 03:36 PM


Xeonox,
   From one of those people who used to be an excessive worrier, this is just wonderful advice!  I'm finding that at one time or other, we all break the rules!  It's just reality!  Can't please everyone, so with a good conscious, ya gotta decide upon your own.  
   Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
                     miscee

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2 posted 2005-03-13 06:13 AM


Worrys only bring more fear, and more to worry...yse, one must never get on that merry-go-round

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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3 posted 2005-04-16 02:57 PM


I wrote something similar one time - long time ago

Blew the words as I often do

Yea I like it

Dave

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4 posted 2005-04-16 04:24 PM


powerful piece
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5 posted 2005-04-16 04:54 PM


Thanks for your responses.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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6 posted 2005-04-17 07:49 AM


great write~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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