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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2005-03-12 09:38 AM



Before we speak
The skies turn billow in winter’s cape
Steam sticks it’s tongue to the sidewalk
And moments halt in a dry and frozen mouth
Yet to race along the rivers underground
Before
Where wings seemed bound by indecisions
Yet there I see flirtatious victories called secure
In gusts of warm breaths, I nestle longing near your soul
The down worn close by phoenix spirits let to fly
And then
Let go of worldly chains, the trade winds lift
For you are more to me than secluded dreams or fantasies
And I am less than schemes of grandeur and slopes of flesh
As thought prevails
The earth falls away and skies illumine in the heat
A pillar forged of impenetrable unwavering trust
That has said my heart, beat by beat and given bend to light
A gentle tug of hope
For love grants freedom to
Be

Copyright Kkh 3/12/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2005-03-12 12:38 PM


Dagnabit...but this is exceptional pining or
is it penning?  Either way kiddo,  is a gem,
hard of texture, sparkle of vision and
polished so very nicely with a vocabulary
that excels...

Magnus
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2 posted 2005-03-13 11:54 AM


Thump...and a bump....this is just too good
to miss...

Soulfisher
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3 posted 2005-03-13 02:20 PM


glad I stumbled upon this one. as always you seem to out do your self.
Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-03-13 02:30 PM


"That has said my heart, beat by beat and given bend to light
A gentle tug of hope
For love grants freedom to
Be"

As always Kathleen...very beautiful.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

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just out of reach
5 posted 2005-03-13 05:32 PM


Just lovely TD. hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

marcel
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6 posted 2005-03-15 12:18 PM


beautifully written and expressed! I love your thoughts when they escape on paper!
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2005-03-15 02:34 AM



"For love grants freedom to
Be"

~ and may you forever "Be".

A loverly write, TD!


EA

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8 posted 2005-03-15 02:37 AM


Love this. Great piece ThisDiamond.
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