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Open Poetry #35

tonight.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-03-12 03:15 AM

tonight
tonight we'll hold hands
and sing
then we'll say goodbye
and dance our way home,
on seperate paths.
i thought you were staying over
because i folded my blankets
and your words are sewn into them
because i thought
i thought tonight was ours
and tomorrow was just a dream
because today was so very real
but i guess i was wrong
because i unfolded my blankets
and tried to sleep
to find tomorrow
because today,
today was so too real,
and the words
your words
sewn into my blanket
are scratching at my skin.

i'm so very sorry if this didnt make sense, i'm unbelieveably tired, but i needed words tonight, so here they are.

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

1 posted 2005-03-12 03:27 AM

Makes perfect sense, and it's beautiful and melodic to my mind. Good job.

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

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