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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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The male fury the female hearth one attracts the other admiration becomes love under themes of 'does he like' under plots of 'does she mind' female coyness male brawn one attracts the other another separates love becomes dislike under themes of 'why didn't she' under subplots of 'how could he' If creatures meet fall apart meet again admiration falls into deeper accords where love disintegrates under the themes of 'who did what, when' better to stave off compromise stay single then. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Enjoyed  Andrew |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's called "change" and "unconditional acceptance"...and other things, in order to stave off the singleness... Very good, Martin. Thank you for this one. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A point of view nicely put across regards sudhir |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
it's the unconditional is what people face up to, when they find we're all conditioned, more or less |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I should send this one to my brother, and would if we were speaking. He just ran another woman out of his life again, and this one he was planning on marrying. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sounds like poor planning |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
a bit didactic but the couplets (yes i'll call them that) and the last stanza were great. in anycase, you got the hamster in my head running again. cheers -majnu |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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