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Fever'd Impasse
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Fever'd Impasse |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fever'd Impasse Dreamscapes come, these slow, and willing, voices mix rhymes, somewhat milling, fevered brow, stretching reach to hold all that’s swelling toward the grasp of gold  Entangled are they, these dreams that swirl wintered limbs seen calling spring’s unfurl yet this fever holds keen dreams that yearn a moment’s ardent, quiet, curl in burn Time in flash, then hand to brow who am I to guess, what now? Fever breaks as mid-dawn arrives ~ would I live in dream’s contrive?  Thus palest gold shifts Venetian blinds as still warm flesh holds some recall kind in that twist that brought you to me in fever’d impasse, this reverie. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (03-12-2005 11:01 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful  My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love this...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful dear Karilea.. Do hope you are feeling better.. I feel your fevered dreams. Hugs~N. ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this reverie! yes! How gold it is! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful my dear poetess friend. What an awesome view. Enjoyed muchly. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous! and gorgeous! Your poem, alone, would glow without the photos! The photos are a breath-taking accompaniment! A treasure in this! miscellanea |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
ver nice mom and i like the pics too |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful, spectacular pictures Karilea. But sorry to hear you are not feeling well. Hope Spring and your health return real, real soon. huggles, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is an exquisite write... regards sudhir |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
The magic alchemy of twilight, when Sunshine won't let go  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Perfect title, Karilea.... One morning soon, there will be a difference in how the sun shines through the trees. Your fever will be gone by then, and your body back to normal, I am sure. Spring will be here, medicine for the body and spirit, and you will no longer live in a contrived dream, but in the new and glorious light of a new and glorious season...Hang in there, good things are coming. Spring sun, herbacious Golden potion, mind obsorbed Taken in through eyes Amazing medicine is this Lifting spirits by its light enjoyed ___________ice/ford ><> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful...beautiful!  Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
even when not feeling well, you write this beautifully lady... shaking my head.. lol....only you. Lovely write mom. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very much ejoyed this awesome piece Karilea. I do hope you are feelin' better. hugs, Chrislane "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Hold on to these beautiful thoughts and get well and strong. Shenachie |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Your words are so gentle. Calming. Good to read you again.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Dreamscapes come, these slow, and willing," ~ Thru' graceful writing of Karilea Rilling. Those photos also add light to my day!~ A great wake me sight up this fine March morning! Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
beautiful poetry and pictures...whew! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh these pictures rock Sunshiny one! (so do the words...but you know that!)  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
talk about poetry in motion, visual poety, prose, the sonnet of morning, the strength of white promise... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Lovely, 'Sunshine', as usual. Bob |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...I thought I had already replied to this lovely poem....so incredible what your camera and mind can put together! |
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