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LukeatNFFC
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since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England

0 posted 2005-03-11 02:57 PM


The Audacity of Love -

The Sun bore through the darkness,
Deep into my mind,
Unaware perhaps,
Of the sadistic pleasure it would grind,
Into a base so gross and discomforting,
That I might draw the light and the darkness as one,
To bear it as a gift,
As deep as my love,
As unique as my feelings,
Just to make your acquaintance.

Could we fly across the universe,
So we could become one,
Reaching the vastness,
Where space becomes undone,
And there, like men maddened by war,
We would brave all peril
For our one and only – each other,
And be together,
Like sister, or brother.


© Copyright 2005 Luke - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-03-11 03:19 PM


to unite in love and mutual compassion - a good thing -

susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-03-13 04:01 AM


~Love is the gest gift to give

~Enjoyed
~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2005-03-14 07:04 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on Love...James
Suetang
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4 posted 2005-03-14 08:59 PM


Absolutely beautiful, Luke.  Welcome to PIP.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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just out of reach
5 posted 2005-03-14 09:30 PM


Very much enjoyed this piece.
Well done.  Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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6 posted 2005-03-14 09:42 PM


Luke,
  I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading your poetry until now.  Just wanted you to know I enjoyed.  Especially fond of:


"Could we fly across the universe,
So we could become one,
Reaching the vastness,
Where space becomes undone,
And there, like men maddened by war,
We would brave all peril
For our one and only – each other,
And be together,
Like sister, or brother."

Thanks for posting.

             miscellanea

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