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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-03-11 05:58 AM


Oh, let not my heart be broken,
nor tears sting and burn,
for a promise, an oath spoken,
my heart for thee does yearn,

Oh, let not your presence be removed,
nor loves pain to crush thy heart,
never was a love ever proved,
for fate has played its part,

For as long as love is life,
life will be my death,
Oh, its power, its mighty sting,
Loving, burning till my last breath,

After the stars have all but faded,
all the deepest seas have dried,
my love for you remains unjaded,
my heart by your ribbon forever tied~


We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-03-11 07:34 AM



A heart capable of such depth of love, emotion and devotion, should never be broken...


EA

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-03-11 07:43 AM


It was broken Linda, several times, but now mended by a guardian of my heart!(Smiles)

Someone close by you... well at least in the same location...LOL

~Love and Hugs
~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


King of Hearts
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3 posted 2005-03-11 12:36 PM


Shakespeare must be one of

your favorite poets  

CastleGuard
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4 posted 2005-03-11 06:38 PM



Oh, my, my....

My Dear Fiery Lady, I am duly impressed, you have outdone yourself this time.

I love this style on you, for it suits you well, and I thank Thee from the bottom of my heart for such a loving dedication.

Methinks I shall have a tough time matching this, if not the style - the content...

Your Knight,
CastleGuard

(P.S.  I think you have just raised the bar for yourself...LOL)

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Lurking
5 posted 2005-03-12 07:36 AM


Wonderful writing

Andrew

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2005-03-12 07:45 AM


Andrew you are making my day warm, and a smile upon my face!

May I thank You again....So glad you think so!

~Love and Hugs
~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-03-12 07:49 AM


Oh, my, my....

My Dear Knight,

so glad you are impressed,

So you really think I look good in this style? does it fit me well? or does it make me look fat..LOL? Just my heart right? because it is so full of love...

Methinks I shall have a tough time matching this, if not the style - the content...

I will be waiting to see if thee sir can match thy Ladys challenge!


~Thy Fiery lady Awaits
~Love and Hugs

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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