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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2005-03-10 12:00 PM

If you want to,
If you are ready,
Willing to
Giving to,
If you are here to stay
To give your heart away,
To give your love away,
Untill then,
Give me answer
To my question,
If you are ready to live,
If you want to,
If you are ready to say,
The days,
To find another way,
To the morning light,
If you are here to stay,
Lay your love to,
To the nights forever,
If you are here to stay,
If you are here to stay,
If you are here to love,
If you are willing to give,
If you are willing to live,
If you are here to stay,
your love to me,
If you are here to stay,
Long dark winter nights,
If you are here to stay,
You are here to stay,
My love......

LadyDracaWolf
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 73
CA

1 posted 2005-03-10 01:47 PM

If you are here to stay,
Long dark winter nights,
If you are here to stay,
You are here to stay,
My love......

Very sweet. The expression of love in this poem is very clearly very deep. This is great.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-03-10 02:28 PM

Vandana, you made the repetition
with slight changes in rhyme
work wonderfully for this poem.

Your writing has come a long way!
So good to see you!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2005-03-10 04:11 PM

A very heartfelt write, vandana.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-03-10 11:18 PM

If........such a huge word.....

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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2005-03-10 11:31 PM

So heartfelt ... I hope you get the answers
Hope

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-03-11 12:00 PM

Hopefully...all things are possible...James

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2005-03-11 12:22 PM

"If you are ready....
to find another way
to the morning light"

How absolutely exquisite!

Take care
Love
Liz

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-03-11 02:35 AM

lovely writing and much enjoyed

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2005-03-13 06:19 AM

~Enjoyed your poem

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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