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Nightshade
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0 posted 2005-03-10 10:48 AM





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March winds breathe sweet dreams
fuzzy warm and sunny blue
sprouting scented green
from bare earth and naked branch
magic of a springtime breeze

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Chris Barker
March 2005
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© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-10 10:49 AM


congrats Chris, and this is a great beginning to your next 10,000....marvelous
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2 posted 2005-03-10 10:54 AM


Brava Chris!!!!!  Congratulations sweetie!
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3 posted 2005-03-10 11:05 AM


OhChris~
This is simply BEAUTIFUL ... you *gift* us with worded-wonder~

Congrats gal on the milestone~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2005-03-10 11:27 AM


Lee, Donna & Marge - thankyou dear ladies for reading and commenting. Hugs!
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5 posted 2005-03-10 11:40 AM


nice write
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6 posted 2005-03-10 11:45 AM


These seem to be your venue,
dear one, and glad I am to say...
Congratulations on your 11,000th post!

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7 posted 2005-03-10 12:06 PM


Hey Chris!!  This is extremely beautiful!!
Congrats on your milestone post!
~Hugs, Love and miss ya, Teed~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

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8 posted 2005-03-10 12:09 PM


vandana, Karilea & Nancy Lee - hugs and many thanks !!
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9 posted 2005-03-10 09:38 PM


Bravo Kiddo,  may you have many many more
just as eloquent and elegant as this.  


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10 posted 2005-03-10 09:46 PM


Magnus my friend, thankyou so much for your kind words. Hugs!
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11 posted 2005-03-10 10:37 PM


Chris, this was a remarkably refreshing piece of poetic writing! Simply beautiful!

Big congratulatory hug for your 11,000th post! Cheerleader


Linda


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12 posted 2005-03-10 10:47 PM


I read this aloud!  It is a stunning collectable for my library! Congratulations
on e l e v e n    t h o u s a n d!

          sadie

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13 posted 2005-03-10 10:53 PM


Linda & Sadie, I appreciate your comments so much. Hugs!
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14 posted 2005-03-10 11:47 PM


Lovely...James
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15 posted 2005-03-14 10:09 PM


Lovely, Chris, You know how I like tanka. I'll take some of that springtime breeze over here......and congrats.....    ~Paul
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Nightshade,
   Refreshing to say the least!  Congratulations on this milestone!  Eleven thous?  I can't even imagine!  Super!

           miscellanea

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17 posted 2005-03-14 10:19 PM


very well done...   : )

~~ Connie ~~

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18 posted 2005-03-14 11:06 PM


I sure did miss this and I'm sorry. I'm glad it came back up

Congrats Chris! Well done! You are a joy!

Looking forward to the next 11,000!

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19 posted 2005-03-14 11:08 PM


Chris...this is just how it has been today in Southern California...I wanted to write it, but you did.  Congrats!  and
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20 posted 2005-03-14 11:14 PM


Thank you for this uplifting poem of the comfort, hope and promise of Spring.

Shenachie

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21 posted 2005-03-15 09:34 AM


Thankyou all so much !  
Hugs !

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22 posted 2005-03-15 09:46 PM


Just beautiful, Chris. Congradulations on your 11,000th post.
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23 posted 2005-03-15 10:15 PM



Many thanks & hugs Sue !!

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