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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-03-10 10:15 AM


Profuse azure stretches to foreign tongue
Depicts break heart honesty
Like the growing space between us
Names of coded years determined
Whispering late breakfasts and firewood
Slowly, climbing out of valleys over hills

Might teases and promises aboriginal song
Like long distance swimmers
High glassy waters of opened seas
Afternoons not sensible

Curling our toes, tickling our knees
Eased Christmas eyes
Wearing diamond studded flickers
We place in our pockets

Blushing sand dabbing our footprints
Ribboning transient veils
I can look through invisible
Reach out and touch your image
Shimmering incense into the pine of mind
Unending space closes the day

On Horizon’s mouth, holding eccentric
Where whitecaps feed a wanton
Is this self-mockery?
Small uneventful things glimpse
Recycling moon, speaking publicly
Deepens remains of sunlight hours
I realize dreams of half dozing
Where you pressed close to me

These I bundle, like my own culture
Half sounding primeval waters
Going deeper then any idealized thought
I always meant to open that door
Naked late tickets mock
Running boarder to boarder
The shadow of your beauty
awakened me...
Becoming my right end



[This message has been edited by LeeJ (03-11-2005 10:53 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-03-10 10:18 AM


dang Lee, this is sort of sad, but maybe it's my mood too

good write

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2005-03-11 11:08 AM


no, not sad, well, a lot at first, but then turned into something good...the wheel of life...all things work out in the end
gemjop
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3 posted 2005-03-15 08:08 AM


Back to the top with this!

I've missed reading your richness, Lee. You have so many flowing ideas, that are each as strong as the last. A wheel of life indeed. x  

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-03-15 08:10 AM


Lee, it is good to be back and reading you again.....your words always leave me with so much to ponder and a smile.  Hugs lady.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2005-03-15 09:22 AM


Good morning, Lovely Lee! I know one thing for sure, the scent of your soul is exceptionally sweet!

Have a glorious day!

Linda

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