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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-03-10 05:23 AM


Swim in nightwaves to
mystical shores, where hearts
are hushed under stars painted
by devine hands.

Eternally kissed by loves
ecstasy, where souls lay
scattered like flowers
in white surf.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-10 06:51 AM


wow! what a scene! just gorgeous!
Goldenrose
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2 posted 2005-03-10 07:26 AM


Well thank you for your words so kind Dix...it is a pleasure writing for pip when i get replies like yours...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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3 posted 2005-03-10 09:19 AM


Love the feel of this, and the imagery that is so sharply drawn...

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SmartChick
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4 posted 2005-03-10 09:42 AM


Beautiful!
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5 posted 2005-03-10 10:38 AM


yes, very beautiful
Goldenrose
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6 posted 2005-03-11 06:22 AM


Thank you for your kind replies...

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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