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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-05 12:47 PM



The hurt the pain inside
the words you spoken was
a true work of art

How you captured my heart
so quickly and that is
not easy to do. why did
I go and take a chance on
a demon like you

Playing with fire
I knew it was what
I was doing you keep
on insiting presisting
forwarding on to my emotions

Feeding off of my very being
why did I ever think you could
be true? to perfect for me
to devious for my liking

My dull pain captivates my
soul sleep never comes
mind always runs

Make it stop I say please
go away I want my brain
and heart to take a vacation

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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1 posted 2005-04-05 03:59 PM


I think many of us have cried those last lines... the same sense of needing numb... for many different reasons. *S*
Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2005-04-05 04:31 PM


grr true that

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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