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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-10 02:12 AM



A young woman
a girl—
she is beautiful

naked she feels
the sun
warm on her skin

she smiles a dead smile

light from the window
falls on her form

her breasts
her legs—
a delicate foot

missing
one toe

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/tg/detail/-/0880016191/102-5575332-8033722?v=glance

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-03-10 02:58 AM


cool...never read the book but I may just go get it since I have all this time on my hands now, back working nights again
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2 posted 2005-03-11 07:18 PM


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-03-11 07:21 PM


enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2005-03-12 06:22 AM


Huan Yi,

   Thanks for the stimulating write that led me to check out its inspiration from the thread you listed.  It was very interesting.

     miscee

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5 posted 2005-03-12 07:18 AM


Great writing
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