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Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2005-03-09 03:33 PM


Just Wondering,
Your graduation, fast approaching
    a time to start new
A whole world awaiting you
   To become the man you are destined, determined to be
And I, in more love with you today than ever
   Waiting for you to come home
       Need to know,
Do I fit into this new world?
This new job, new city, new life?
You deserve the materialization of your dreams
You deserve all the happiness one person can possess
But as I sit here waiting patiently
  as I have for so long now
      dreaming of the day that is almost here
Am I part of your dreams for the future?

I'm just wondering....

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
   ~Robert Frost


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sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27
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1 posted 2005-03-09 03:34 PM


This is a very good write.

Poetry is beauty in words.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-03-09 08:57 PM


one can never really know what's going to happen

my daughter went through this with her boyfriend who is almost 2 years older than her, so he graduated sooner. They had plans to be together after she graduated but he moved and decided on going into the Marine Corp and now they hardly ever talk.

Sad.

Martini
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3 posted 2005-03-10 09:09 AM


Sweet Poetress:
Thank you for your reply.

Passing Shadows:
You are right, we can never know.  In my situation however I was the one who graduated first, and I have a terrific job, and I'm not wanting to move... So we'll have to see where the spring leads us.

Thanks for responding.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-03-11 11:39 PM


Thankfully the time is approaching when you will receive answers for something so important to you....James
Martini
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5 posted 2005-03-14 12:23 PM


James,

Thankfully indeed, although i must admit that I am excited and scared all at the same time.  I think I have to leave this little question in the hands of fate to see what will happen.

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