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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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I know the dark path in the horizontal around entrances and exits in the vertical mine shafts. They make one wonder of the light at the tunnel's end will a incandescent shaft be sent once that light arrives what about the dark that thrived... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (03-09-2005 02:50 AM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, last line...like the way you delivered this... very enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one needs light to live well but I do thrive in the dark good piece, thought-provoking |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martin Your poetry is deep and exact, compact and clear... This one is no exception. enjoyed __________ice ><> |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Martin, Very well spoken. Enjoyed this read. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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