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Lady Ollyne
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0 posted 2005-03-08 05:22 PM





As
the softness
of flakes touched these cheeks
on this coldest turn of the winds
they melted to the warmth of mine thoughts
in the wanting of tomorrow's arrival,
not sure when or how these
waiting arms shall meet
and fold unto
Thee.


Lady O

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1 posted 2005-03-08 05:27 PM


Sweet....the shape is the envelope, and the envelope is the shape....beautifully conceived and immaculately carried out!

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-03-08 06:18 PM


Beautiful...absolutely exquisite!!

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

ctowen
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3 posted 2005-03-08 08:05 PM


I find falling stars easier to wish on in a nightly view .....

       .... and such grasp in the new day's rising.


                               May your dreams find true.


                                            

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-03-08 08:21 PM


very soft and warm
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