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Zinsser
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Calif.

0 posted 2005-03-08 03:25 PM



You once asked me why
I couldn't answer
though all the words were there
I chose you long ago
I laugh because you didn't even know
long before we had loved ones in common
long before you signed to my momma
long before we spoke on the phone
long before our time alone
then when you touched me
it was all so unexpected
all those things hit me
that had gone undetected
I felt like I had just come home
more like a women then I had ever known
I finally felt safe in more ways then one
Now, just the thought of you
can take my breath away
hang in there
I just have a few
more words to say
no matter where you are
remember that i am here
and when ever you want a brake
from your world
I'll provide that for you
and hold you near
don't ever forget
how beautifull you are
my soul to your's
near or far


© Copyright 2005 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-08 05:16 PM


lovely.    Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

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2 posted 2005-03-08 05:23 PM


That's a feeling without parallel.....live it!

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3 posted 2005-03-08 07:51 PM


precious
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