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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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hemless of willow whisper to my mind dancer of leaf rings when there is still dark under the sun's speak and the sky forgot it was yesterday bring me your song bowls of indigo ice wrap them in linen made from the fados of a conjured morn with velvet woven from the wind strums verdant emerald who is nightingale she wings the lotus to sway her bosom pale kentia with kinu slumber oneiric shadow of god glassed prayers _________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are looking at someone who stands by the beauty of things, nature in her glory...infinity, herself...we...the angel of God's blessings, reaps a wealth of song...this was an enchanting peace, would love to hear it put to music Hugs for another lovely write... |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great writing  Andrew |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lee j..I was humming when I wrote it with a koto playing off to the edge of the garden of stones actually I was punishing the neighbor's cat for waking me.so I sang to her think she is halfway to la by now thanks lady friend ____________________ Andrew, thanks for the read and the kind reply you bless me sir |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this is exquisite - like sitting beneath the willow beside the pond with breeze kissed songs of enchantment - watching the swans - your words touch lovely - magic even -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Such ethereal beauty here ..... ~P |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan, you are colored there my brushes whisper your name, smile warm with this today. __________________ choshi, thank you for the read and warm reply |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Swing your brush over your singsong... it paints every day so very well! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
so well written, so luscious, i could taste the words on my tongue. lovely |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
your whispers forever in the breeze shall sing before the storm~ My spirit will rise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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