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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-08 06:40 AM


The Manifest

It manifest itself by chance
Through the inkling of a glance
That lit a light unto my mind
And brought to me a memory find

It touched the embers of a fire
Brought again a strong desire
Stimulating taste and smell
The spirit of a past I dwell

It took me far away from home
A place where I and love once roam
A field of green an Eden scene
A place of preen a lovely queen

And in this core of space and place
I warmed my heart within its grace
And sipped upon this wine of dine
Until the moon was in decline

And in the mornings wash of dew
I shed a tear this touch of you


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1 posted 2005-03-08 06:49 AM


Oh, what a lovely memory ~ and you expressed it so poetically, Sir Sigh.

May this day be a wonderful memory in the making.

Hugs with love,
EA

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-03-08 07:44 AM


Morning Sy

How beautifully your memory describes
Water colors everywhere, within the life of life....Does Jebb Bush know your having this
much fun?...he'd be envious...hehehe

Hugs

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3 posted 2005-03-08 08:52 AM


Morning Sy!
Beautiful beautiful morning write..
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with us each day.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

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4 posted 2005-03-08 08:56 AM


Wonderful writing Seymour

Andrew

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5 posted 2005-03-08 11:02 AM


I stayed up awhile this morning...I'm glad I did
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6 posted 2005-03-08 11:45 AM


"And in the mornings wash of dew
I shed a tear this touch of you"

Inside this heart of feelings known
A Sighing Knight, in memories flown,
Was seen by each in morning's sown
The touching all, his words of own.

Always A Most Pleasureable
Morning Read, Sir Sy

Lady O

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7 posted 2005-03-08 03:39 PM


Absolutely lovely Seymour, always a pleasure to read you

Maree

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

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8 posted 2005-03-08 04:31 PM


This is so lovely, my friend... simply beautiful! *S*
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You, sir, are in a class of one....excellent stuff!

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10 posted 2005-03-08 05:12 PM


And in the mornings wash of dew
I shed a tear this touch of you


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as always your humilty and tender rhymes touch and effect.

*sigh*

*ww*

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

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11 posted 2005-03-08 05:13 PM


Ah Sy...thank you for this!
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