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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-03-08 05:30 AM


I Just want you to hold me,
Mold me with you body,

Smother me with your kisses,
Passionately caress my face,

Look deep into my eyes,my soul,
Tell me I am the one,

Show me your heart,let your words
flow like a river into my soul,

Captivate me, entrance me with loves' spell,
Hold me so close I can hear your heart beat,

So close I can feel you breathe,
So close I can smell your skin,

So close I can kiss your neck,
So close the world doesn't exist,

I can't breath, for your love intoxicates me,
I can't think, for you are only my thoughts,

I want to go wild with you,
dance every dance with you,

Explore every mystery, every dream with you,
I want to be your skin and cover you,

I want to be your eyes and see what you see,
To be your heart and feel what you feel,

I want to be your thoughts, your mind,
I want our souls, our bodies to entwine,

I want to comfort you, Love you, I want
to please you, tease you,

I want you completely, deeply, endlessly,
Passionatly,To where you and I are no longer
Two...but the One.




We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-08-2005 06:48 AM).]

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Marshalzu
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1 posted 2005-03-08 05:54 AM


Enjoyed
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2005-03-08 06:06 AM


Thanks again Marshalzu! Glad you enjoyed!

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-03-08 09:00 AM


Now that is what I'd call "close"! You are one passionate poetessa!

I wish I had written this and could give it to he who is the object of my affection!


EA
As you love, so may you be loved!

CastleGuard
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4 posted 2005-03-08 07:38 PM



Yes, Earth Angel, Lady ARH's passion is unmatched. It flows out in crimson streams from the lake of her loving heart; it nourishes and feeds a hungry traveller, who stops by the woods to rest, under the oaken tree...

Thank you, my Lady of Crimson Footprints, for the beautiful poem.

CG



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5 posted 2005-03-11 12:34 PM


Wow what a pssionate woman no one can hold a candle to you
passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-03-11 12:36 PM


are ya'll for real?

one can never tell these days, especially when two people live so far from each other

CastleGuard
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7 posted 2005-03-11 12:50 PM



LOL, passing shadows...

...reality is a relative term...

CG

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2005-03-11 12:55 PM


Yes Dixie, we are..thank you !

Love and Hugs
~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2005-03-11 07:05 PM


Beautiful writing...a pleasure to read...James
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10 posted 2005-03-11 09:25 PM


Very passionate,  filled deeply with the
desire of one for another.... May you one
day get your wish, your dream come true.

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11 posted 2005-03-12 02:45 AM


enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Professor Gloom
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12 posted 2005-03-12 07:01 AM


No one reading your poetry
Can deny your passion of expression
Or of the romance of your heart

Enjoyed

Gloom

A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 2005-03-12 07:35 AM


Thowing kisses to everyone...

Thanks, you are all so kind and sweet...

Luv Ya Bunches!
~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

The One & Only
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14 posted 2005-03-12 10:58 AM


So much there if it could only  trun in my own! Thanks you put into words how i feel!
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