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Open Poetry #35

Velvet Thorns

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

0 posted 2005-03-08 03:10 AM

dripping wax
of dew formed magic
sprinkled by fairies
like dust on a field
shared majesticly by two
whom became one
timelessly tied
by destinies
velvet thorns
of forbiddance

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2005-03-08 04:50 AM

Beautiful writing, thanks for sharing it I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2005-03-08 11:30 AM

You say it excellently. So easy to relate to... Hoping to read more from you;
sadie

oh--and what a super title for this!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-03-08 11:33 AM

again, another fine description of what could have beens....brilliantly done

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-03-08 11:34 AM

one I wished I had written, very nice

M

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

5 posted 2005-03-08 02:46 PM

Thanks everyone... I was so scared to post because it has been a long time since I have written anythig at all....

Thanks Again

~~ Connie ~~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2005-03-08 03:03 PM

Connie, don't let your fear keep your lovely writings from us.

Enjoyed. Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2005-03-08 03:40 PM

connie i am so happy to see you back here

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2005-03-08 04:22 PM

Thanks Slick... good to be back in more ways the you can know...

: )

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