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ecrivan
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0 posted 2005-03-08 12:32 PM


Those that rinsed their minds
purified their waters
those who rinsed their bodies
discolored the source

in the end the mind healed
the body limped
a great release occured
a cave rock moved
and the spirit escaped....

centuries passed
spirit gazes unleashed
powers to heal
restore inner peace
the ignorant remained inobservant
they rinsed their minds,
so they thought

others washed their flesh
their bodies limped
but heal sores vanished
a great release occured

© Copyright 2005 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-08 05:59 AM


I enjoyed reading this incredible peice of poetry, thank you for sharing it

Andrew

ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-03-08 08:47 PM


I think there's still room to be healed...in any way, thanks Andrew


froggy
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3 posted 2005-03-10 12:21 PM


Martin,
  I agree with you about room to heal.
Enjoyed this piece very much.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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4 posted 2005-03-10 01:05 AM


Hello Elie

After the petition I reminded you about no one has signed for several months; I thought you should know that.It is a shame.


passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-03-10 06:57 AM


what petition?
LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-03-10 10:47 AM


this gives a whole new meaning to the cliche, "It's never to late"  

well done

ecrivan
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7 posted 2005-03-12 12:20 PM


No it's never too late to learn but so many of us like to pull an attitude when that time comes.


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