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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-03-08 12:03 PM



At dusk

Beside the red hill

An ox
And his mate

Watch
A stillness


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Enjoyed

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intersting~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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3 posted 2005-03-08 10:22 AM


Zazen indeed.....!
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4 posted 2005-03-08 11:14 PM


The way you capture an atmosphere with such absolute economy....it's worthy of study.

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5 posted 2005-03-09 03:41 AM


loved the crisp images...well done!
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