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EvocativeVerse2
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0 posted 2005-03-07 09:37 PM



‘Tis Warmth Which Earns the Heart of One Beloved

Did this morn feather thee with kisses sweet?
Bequeath thee the favor of lady fair?
Didst thou awaken ‘neath a rumpled sheet?
Or were you but dreaming kisses of air?

Dawdle not by limpid pools of hunger,
Bathe in her waters if thou wouldst be loved,
Ere wantonness is passed to the younger,
‘Tis warmth which earns the heart of one beloved.

© Copyright 2005 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-03-07 09:44 PM


~ and I do believe that thy warmth and fine turn of phrase wouldst capture many a fair maiden's heart....

Love & Light,
EA


ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-03-07 10:53 PM


Spoken from a truth beyond truths.
Well Done.
TD

Martie
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3 posted 2005-03-07 11:00 PM


EV2

"Ere wantonness is passed to the younger,
‘Tis warmth which earns the heart of one beloved."

I believe that this is true....beautifully said by you!

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2005-03-08 04:44 AM


I agree!

~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


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5 posted 2005-03-08 05:57 AM


Great writing

Andrew

Sadelite
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6 posted 2005-03-08 11:25 AM


May I echo Earth Angel?  I believe she's right!  Enjoyable reading, as always...
           sadie

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7 posted 2005-03-08 12:43 PM


Mmmmm me love this piece.
Love it love it love it yes I do love it.
Your words melt this heart.

;-)

hugs

Amour Vous,

Within this heart you'll find love

froggy
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8 posted 2005-03-21 11:59 PM


Just needed that magic touch you have.
:-)

Amour Vous,

Within this heart you'll find love

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9 posted 2005-03-22 05:02 AM


Beautifully penned... I like the softness... the promise. *S*
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