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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2005-03-07 06:48 PM


Did i hear you breathe-
as you held your breath
leaving me waiting for the answer,
Didn't i see you cry-
the wanting too much to bare
you were with another.

But you were all i wanted-
all i needed, all i cared about,
heaven was here amongst us,
So why do tears fall-
soaking into me he never cared
so much to let you cry upon his shoulder.

I wish i could kiss you're lips-
cannot bare to wait much longer
still least i get to hold you,
frozen feelings by you're words-
you could never cheat
save you're heart for another time,

I'm not listening to anything-
but the meaning in your eyes
all that pain inside,
Lets slip away into a world alone-
just you and i no-one else
be mine for a moment then a moment longer.

© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
1 posted 2005-03-07 11:32 PM


I love this..
Did you just happen to know
exactly what I was feeling tonight?
Thanks a Bunch for the great work.
~Jen

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-03-08 04:25 AM


This was sad, filled with raw, but honest emotion!

~ARH

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


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