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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-07 04:16 PM


With Her


There they come again,
those feelings I
wanted to feel.

Keep this up and
I might start
believing that
love is real.


JamesLee
March06
2005

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

1 posted 2005-03-07 04:24 PM


It sounds like she is extra special!  Enjoyed your poem, James.

       sadie

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2 posted 2005-03-07 05:30 PM


good feelings are nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
3 posted 2005-03-07 09:06 PM


isn't it sooooo  scarey   : )
Copperbell
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4 posted 2005-03-08 08:51 PM


Nice...
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