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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-03-07 01:23 PM



upon this painted pony
of pretty prose spoken
rides my heart beat longing
in rhythm to the hooves
of a gallop song driven
across the sun kissed prairie
of love thoughts shimmering
beneath the warm golden glow
of your soul shine expanse

I feel your breeze blown breath
upon my rose blushed cheeks
in open air caress
your wind fingers strumming
through hair strands streaming
kindling eye light fire
within my far sighted gaze

you are the mountain range looming
stalwart and steadfast
horizon gifts giving
in solid rise promise
brushed in lavender blue hues
of my deep seeded need
to be enveloped by you

can you hear the coyote sounds rejoicing?
at the star shine rise
as we bask
in the moon glow blessing
awash across our frontier exploration
of these virgin lands
that accept our trail blazed passing
seared in lover’s brand
upon our hands

s.a.t.


If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

[This message has been edited by Susan (03-07-2005 10:28 PM).]

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Grover
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1 posted 2005-03-07 01:26 PM


Very well written.
MGROVES
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2 posted 2005-03-07 05:59 PM


awesome  what a vision  what feeling

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2005-03-07 06:46 PM


hmmmmmmmmmm
got my brandin iron heated
and my tattoo rig sharpened
and my tie up good rope all coiled
so..can I color you?

enjoyed this suzz


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4 posted 2005-03-07 06:49 PM


~wonderful~      hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

Susan
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5 posted 2005-03-07 10:31 PM


Thank you Grover - for your double the fun

MmmmGroves - you smile me - thank you for your warm my friend

D - let me explore your mind thought lands colored by your dream touches - yes please -

Chris - thank you for your kindness -

Hugs all - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

jwesley
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6 posted 2005-03-08 09:48 PM


Funny...I DO hear the coyote howling...or is that my dog out back whinning?  (can't be, she's chasing squirrels in God's yard now...)

Either way,really enjoyed this...loved the picture too (new to me, but would even if it was old to me) and as always, enjoyed your words.

Jimmy

EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2005-03-08 10:02 PM


I love this Susan. 'Tis a beautful picture you paint. Very lucky guy indeed.
Susan
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8 posted 2005-03-09 10:28 AM


Jimmy - you smile me - thank you for the delight of your reply

Kevin - you are most kind, my friend - thank you

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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9 posted 2005-03-09 01:30 PM


Susan, very nicely written - really enjoyed this one.  (A Prairie girl at heart yanno.)

What's past is prologue.
William Shakespeare

~ Carpe' Diem ~

choshi
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10 posted 2005-03-09 01:57 PM


So wonderfully evocative of bot imagery and feelings that you paint    ~P
Susan
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11 posted 2005-03-09 02:26 PM


Thank you Mysteria - there is something about the praries, yes - with the mountains looming in the distance - just on the edge-

Thank you Chosi - most kind

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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