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Thy Knights Joust of Love
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Thy Knights Joust of Love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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My knight, my love, I weep, for deep is pain, for my heart cries, be not afraid, do not sleep, Tears I cry, down cheeks, through hearts eyes, Today my sweet, I may loose thee, This battle, this brutal test, Proving thy love only for me, Upon thy stallion of this quest, My heart, if thee die before my face, Know my love tis forever true, I give unto you, my silver heart necklace, Place it around thy neck,my devoted love I prove, In pain, in sorrow, my heart you possess, Be forever strong, free and brave, Ride with my loves fire, my souls caress, For you are free in my love, not a slave, Kiss thy heart for the luck of goodness, Ride upon the wind of eagles wings, Stand firm, valiant,don't give in to weakness, If ever I lost thee,your my life, my everything, My love, know my love deeply, know this love truely, when the moment the battle begins or starts, My soul forever branded inside your heart, Be thy brave knight, be the strong man you are, Honoured I am, to have your love for me, Just one last kiss, as I wish upon our star, Win this, loves test, for you a jousting victory.  Thank you for "The Gift"~  We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow!! this is absolutely beautifull  i could not see the picture though. it dissapered ? My spirit will rise |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
My dear Lady of Crimson Words..  It is easily understod why the Knights of yore were so willing to impale themselves upon a fast approaching piece of wood...if the Ladies of yore had but one tenth of your fire and passion... And if the Knight did not get dizzy and fall off his horse he might have even replied in a poetic tongue...CG [This message has been edited by CastleGuard (03-07-2005 07:33 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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King of Hearts Junior Member
since 2003-09-12
Posts 32 |
I hope a king will do? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
ARH, well said, and I think you will wear nicely the gift. You are both lucky to have the other. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ilove the old world feel and the midevil dance of lady and knight - lovely Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thou hast the courtly grace and words to carry this off, along with thine knights heart. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Again I state Great writes that I have read between the Fair Lady and her Knight. I believe this adventure will have no end Tom The Rogue |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~Thanks Tom, Yes I agree, for a love that is destined will forever be~ I was busy replying to others to see that you had replied to CastleGuards poety! Thanks for seeing that and for the encouragement, glad you noticed and are reading, and replying! Thank you again~ "Let me not to the marriage of true minds |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
very passionate and beautiful,enjoyed New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
I seem to have read this before...and it is part of the same circle.... GR. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You do write this genre of poetry very well!  EA P.S. You have captivating eyes! |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Dear Sir Goldenrose, A circle, once completed, remains closed. New circles may form and trace their own trajectories, guided by the winds of Fate. I do respectfully request that your replies spin within the circle of "Passions In Poetry", as shall mine. Thank you. CastleGuard |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Tis beautiful echoing thoughts my heart duth share.  Regret not that which you have done, |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Castle guard...please define ''passions''...passions in poetry can be about ANY subject...it could be about a passion for collecting coins..a passion for collecting fossils..a passion for horror films... a passion for identifying different mud consistancies and it would still be more interesting than this passion, it is something that has been worked to death and it no longer enthralls but bores...i respectfully offer my opinions...as one who used to write these one dimensional poems... .i think that even ARH would agree that she is a better writer at other subjects..we discussed it often enough...she needs to show us that she can write other poetry...then you will see a very good poet..instead of this mush all the time...go here to see her writing something other than her usual /pip/forum31/html/003031.html then tell me she should write the same thing all of the time, this is designed to help her... not surround her with yes men who will not tell her she will never learn if she continues with the same vein. Try something different and show us what you can do.... Have a great day everyone... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (03-15-2005 06:50 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not that it's any of my business, but I don't want to see anyone get kicked out of here please can we just focus on the poetry, and not the hurts of the past? internet romances are way over-rated anyhow...if it's a true life relationship, then fine, but as long as there is distance, what more can there be than just writing or talking on the phone or mailing through the postal service anyway? It's ridiculous to believe in love on the net...but this is poetry and this is just writing. How could it be anything more? Love develops over time, not over the net when you don't know someone but by their voice over the phone or whatever. It's nice love poetry, only to be believed if two people writing it are actually living close to one another and they see each other in real life. If not, then Phil, blow it off. You've been through all this. For whatever reason, it didn't work with you two. I'm not one to give the benefit of the doubt so I'd say don't sweat it. You know what it's all about. What is simply is. Live and let live. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
~ "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (03-16-2005 09:33 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
ARH this will be my last say on this subject...you can write when you put your mind to it..you can write anything...but this is your choice..fine..and please dont try to say things that are not true...or maybe i should say something that ARE true about what you have said about members of this forum...dont try to sensor me...i have never openly said bad things about anybody on here..but you on the other hand have i think...did you not?...maybe i should let the people know?.... Have a great day everybody and now i will concentrate on writing my poetry.... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
both of you need to grow up just my opinion, take it with a grain of salt |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is a poetry site, not a dating service. I just wish everyone would get back to writing poetry for the sake of poetry please? I agree, that some need to grow up, and you can forget the salt from me I am afraid! This was a really nice poem until it was taken where it went. |
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