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Grover
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0 posted 2005-03-06 06:28 PM


Broken


Just walking down this dusty road
Only you on my mind

The way you dumped me...

Yesterday's rainbow now seems unreal
And useless and colorless and superficial.

© Copyright 2005 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2005-03-06 07:13 PM




Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2005-03-06 07:15 PM


sorry you are hurting....
Sadelite
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3 posted 2005-03-06 07:33 PM


ditto... I can feel your hurt.  I hope you feel better soon...
         sadie

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displaced
4 posted 2005-03-06 07:39 PM


feeling your pain, yes

there are more rainbows yet to come

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5 posted 2005-03-06 08:30 PM


oh! my!! god!!  m'friend ,glover~

  i have really missed you, emailed you a couple of times, didnt hear back~
my heart saddens, seeing you in pain~
but your being here eases the sorrow in my own heart~ being dumped, coming back, dumped again. so i parted to move on in life. if it's meant to be, it will, if not , it wont.  life goes on, sad to say. enough of that.  i am so glad to see you here.  i pray all gets well and your dreams come true,

Grover
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6 posted 2005-03-07 09:57 AM


Thanks everyone... I'm not going through this. Rather, it is something from my past. I'm in love with the same woman I married 25 years ago.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-03-07 11:06 PM


I write lots of stuff like this...from disappointments of many years ago...James
Copperbell
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8 posted 2005-03-08 12:09 PM


Nice to read your stuff again Grover.


ecrivan
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my own state
9 posted 2005-03-08 12:25 PM


It's easy to use and let others use us..good little write


Yu Lan
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10 posted 2006-04-09 06:57 PM


Hi - I fished you out of my library
You're really good at showing strong emotions with words that don't get too flowery.. I love it - it really aches..

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

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